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i had this done before i had finished the AkuNo sketch, but Reno forced his way up first. Tart.

:iconohwhyplz: FML IF I EVER COME IN CONTACT WITH A PISSED AXEL

So all my submissions lately have had THE MOST BORING COMPOSITIONS EVER. UGH. IT'S DRIVING ME NUTS. and so with this one, i was like, 'motion! blood! 8D that's interesting!' FDLSJDFK i'll make an interesting composition soon, i promise D:

i like how the colouring turned out, i tried to colour it less smoothly than normal, gah it was so hard :iconnotimpressedplz: i kept wanting to blend things and my hand was like, 'wheeeeeee blendie~!' and i was like 'OMFG NO. -smack-'
my hand still got away from me a lot tho

who is axel beating up? Demyx? Marly? a DA admin?
you choose :iconimhappyplz:

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prismacolor markers
blood splatters done on Photoshop

Critiques


:iconknock-on-manga:
well, i agree with the dog tag, the emotion was done very well. however, the only thing i feel is that the hair shading needs to be a bit bolder (to compare to the bold shading in the skin) it's a little off, and can be darker in some places, but other than that, this is one awesome work of art!!!

The blood gives this the perfect touch. But (in my opinion) a few blood spots in the bottom left hand corner would of really wrapped it all together! If you want to try to make blood spots without photoshop, try using some colored Indian Ink. Magenta + Red + a small (like, really, REALLY small) amount of black, and you have a nice realistic blood color!

Your work with Prismacolor markers, is (as always) is very impresive!
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:iconleahhimura24:
This is something really different and I like it! You really achieved the emotion of anger in this picture and I really like that about the piece.

What I really like about the piece is the combination of anime and realistic qualities. I mean the teeth are amazing!! You made them look real without screwing up the piece which I've scene a lot when people try to do realistic teeth. The shading and lighting of his skin is beautifully done and his eyes are gorgeous!! The blood spatter is a great effect and it works with the hair. The hair is great by the way. Axel's hair is hard.

I think the only thing that needs work on is his dog tag. The number could have been more neatly done. Other wise this piece is gorgeous and needs no other improvement. Great job!
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:iconazulezircon:
I wanna say DA admin. XD But I'm loving the look of a pissed off Axel. That is made of win to me.

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Cliche: Only the most cliched story ever.
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Oh Hell!
Fooking Awesome!
I really don't want to meet a pissed Axel =O

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 じしf_,)ノ This is Kitty. Copy Kitty into ur sig n help him on his way to t3h world domination!
Stop Motion =O [link]
:iconumejey:
Kikiiiii this is fantasssticcc
You drew his emotion so well you can feeel the rage!
The colours are fantastic (as always <3)
;___; the necklace is asdfghjkl fantastic the shading highlights the shape omgggg.
The backgrounds my fave thing its simple but shittt son that bloods epic baller *n*
I love the yellow added to the coat and his skin
alsoalsoalso i love that you can still see some white :iconimhappyplz: i donno it makes it feel epic
yesmmm
can i have this?
kthnxbai
sweetiepie <3


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♥ Olivia Em.
:iconkimorchii:
Ohhh crap. This is something new! 8DDD
Love the expression, blood... just everything.
:iconshroomergurl:
lol a dA admin.

as for the piece itself, i love the rage and emotion of the entire thing. the coloring is lovely, and you did a good job on the blood splatter. Axel seems to just be overflowing w/ rage and anger. love it, and it's one of my fave's now :D
:iconsexypancake:
Wow! His face is *amazing*! I'm truly impressed. Nice job.
:iconatomic-clover:
baaaaaw thank you!
i was scared about the blood, i didnt know if i had overdone it or anything, so im happy you approve ^^
<3

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:iconvampiregoddess20:
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I am speachless, Kiki D:
FUCKING. SPEECHLESS.

Just... Just epiiiic
I loooove the coloring and and and the blood and his beautiful green eyes and gaaah :icongwahplz:

I saw the thumbnail and like. froze. instant fear, man. I got like really scared. then I clicked and WHOA.

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Axel and Roxas will always be B.F.F.s
Butt.Fuckers.Forever.
:bulletpurple::bulletblack::bulletpurple::bulletblack:
icon by me for me and ~Roxas-Number-XIII
:iconatomic-clover:
thank you~! ^^

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