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My half of the commission trade with ~kurosora1984 OMG ASFJKLASJFLKAJDFAL I NEEDED TO GET THIS OUT OF MY SYSTEM.

So on friday i randomly decided to pick up ~kurosora1984's fic Show Me The Money, and it was ridiculous, I could not stop reading. I ended up going to bed at 4am because it came to the point where i couldnt see anymore i had been reading off my comp screen for so long.
I usually always only read fanfiction at night, the day is for drawing and friends and being productive and stuff, and then at night i reserve for reading, BUT UGH. ON SATURDAY I JUST COULD NOT WAIT TILL THE EVENING TO CONTINUE READING THIS FIC, I WAS SO ADDICTED, and so i read some more while i was drawing and it was so. depressing. i was crying so hard, the fic made me feel SO MUCH. IT WAS RIDICULOUS. and i had been working on commissions and drawing smiling ppl, but after reading the chapter I just couldnt do it anymore. i was so emotionally distraught i turned on Brand New and drew this thing while listening to depressing music. it basically drew itself.

AFDJKALDJF ANYWAYS. HELLO LONG ARTISTS COMMENT.
BASICALLY... YOU ALL NEED TO READ THIS STORY. IT IS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT, AMAZING, STUNNING i have never reacted so poignantly to a fanfiction before, Salem's writing is just beautiful, and the plot... ugh, it's incredible. and amazing. and you just grow SO ATTACHED ASJFLAJDFAAJFLAJFALFJA
I LOVE THIS STORY. OMFG.
so yeah... this is a scene from the story. it was so sad, i was crying.... afjaskfl ugh.
GO READ IT. ALL OF YOU. NOW.

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First off, the posing is done VERY well. i like the angles that you used. now, i HAVEN'T seen this pairing before (lies, i know) but i do have to say, this is probably one of the best one i've seen in a long time.

now, onto the correction... i feel that your head-to-body ratio is a little off. the bodies look a little small for their heads. and it shows in the size of their ribcages and arms. the background is just lovely. and the way the colors come together are just awesome. but, i think what would really wrap this piece together, is to not center them in the center of the page (sounds odd lol) but to have them on one of the sides. With either Roxes's back against the right side of the page, or Axel's back against the left side. it would give it a much more romantic feel.

again, keep up the good work! i'm always interested in what your talents show!!!!!
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:iconmioroxmysox:
Oh my god! I love this!! I love that fic (see needs to do more) it's delicious and i havent seen enough fanarts for it :iconiloveitplz: and you made it so pretty!!! :icondroolplz: is this the part after he breaks the phone? I adore that part :3 it's saved on my ipod T3T

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:iconnorikuu:
always loved your coloriiingg =v=

<3 akuroku
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awww so cute <3 i shall go and try to read the story X3 if i havent already lol

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That's so funny! I totally started reading that too and had to go to bed late last night! Lol!

Once again, astonishing picture. I LOVE it! You always draw these two so perfectly :giggle: Way to go!
:iconlilnaruto:
That's one of my favorite stories of hers, as well as Through the Shadows, that one's great!

Awesome work, as always :D
:iconkatfrog08:
LINK?? WHERE'S THE LINK FOR THIS FABULOUS STORY??

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Or at least an author/title I can search on ff.net or...WHERE IS IT D':

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LOL you saved it on your ipod?! HOW DO YOU DO THAT!?

SPOILER! IF YOU'RE READING COMMENTS, DONT READ THIS ONE, SPOILERSPOILER BLARG
actually, i sketched this right when i got to the part where namine died and they did their first kiss... thing, that's why axel's wearing a collared shirt and stuff c:
and then the next day i got to the phone part and realized they were very similar, so it's kinda both :D

BUT OMG I KNOW RIGHT?!? THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH FANARTS FOR THIS. IT'S DRIVING ME NUTS
so i already have a second pic started, a very sexy sexy roxasss x3

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LOL
its imbedded in the words "Show Me The Money" in the artists comment, just hold your mouse over them and the link appears, hurr i kno, im tricky xD

ITS AMAZING
IM SO EXCITED FOR YOU TO EXPERIENCE THE AWESOME

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OMG I LOVE TTS SO MUCH
she is just amazing
everything by her is just... STELLARWIN.

thank you~! ^^

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I read this story...it was sooo good xD

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