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That said, there doesn't seem to be any shadows or light source, so nothing particularly stands out. Even though the two of them are interacting, they look like they were cut from two different pictures and put together.
While I can tell who they because of their costumes, I would otherwise say that this doesn't really look all that much like Billy and Teddy. First of all, they book look way too skinny, especially Teddy. I know that you tend to make people pretty thin in your drawings, but Teddy is a big guy. Even Billy, who is relatively small in the comics, seems scarily thin, especially in the thighs. Billy's face seems off somehow, possibly because I'm used to him with pretty small eyes. His hair though also seems too short and too light, so it doesn't seem to feel like him.
The pose itself is pretty bland. It doesn't really say much to me or say anything special about the two of them. Its sweet, but doesn't really have any substance behind it.
The background/setting confuses me a little, and I don't really know where it is supposed to be. Are they above New York, in the clouds? The white swirls on Teddy's legs seem out of place, and the background is pretty light and hard to make out.
Overall, I feel like this could have been a much more dramatic piece, even from the line art. More dynamic shadows would add a lot, as would a proper setting (though I know you don't like doing them very much). While your style and coloring is as lovely as always, it is just that, sugary sweet and lovely. I feel like this could have been a lot more.
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